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I spent quite a lot of my writing time yesterday hunting down a quote and making some unexpected discoveries. If you’re interested in how much time it takes to be accurate, and/or intrigued by how AI can actually be used to improve human writing, read on. It does get a bit technical, but that’s part of the job.

My hunt began with this quote, which popped up in a Facebook post from a writer I follow:

“As Woolf, the most fervent of readers, wrote, a book ‘splits us into two parts as we read,’ for ‘the state of reading consists in the complete elimination of the ego,’ while promising ‘perpetual union’ with another mind.”

Reading, in other words, takes us outside of ourselves and gives us access to another reality.

I’m neither a fan nor a scholar of Virginia Woolf, so this didn’t ring a bell, but it seemed like an intriguing idea that would be useful for a new project I’m working on (more on this at a later date).

The sentence had no citation, either for Woolf or for the author quoting her, so I followed it across multiple social media accounts where other writers repeated it, and eventually found what seems to be the original source: a 2015 essay in the New Yorker, “Can Reading Make you Happier?” by Ceridwen Dovey. (www.newyorker.com/culture/cultural-comment/can-reading-make-you-happier)

Dovey also doesn’t provide a source for the Woolf quotes, and obviously I wanted to read Woolf’s observations in context. But I tried searching all the usual places (Google books, JSTOR, Project Gutenberg, MUSE, Woolf collections) and found nothing. Even when I searched separately for each quotes in the sentence, all I came up with was the same Dovey essay, reproduced all across the Internet.

So I asked Claude to identify each one, and instantly got my answers.

It turns out that Ceridwen Dovey was splicing. The quote “splits us into two parts as we read” has nothing to do with acessing another reality through reading—or, for that matter with most kinds of reading at all. It comes from a Woolf essay called “Notes on an Elizabethan Play,” and it has, narrowly, to do with how hard it is to appreciate Elizabethan drama due to is inherent difficulties. Woolf writes:

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“But the plays of the lesser Elizabethans—Greene, Dekker, Peele, Chapman, Beaumont and Fletcher,—to adventure into that wilderness is for the ordinary reader an ordeal, an upsetting experience which plies him with questions, harries him with doubts, alternately delights and vexes him with pleasures and pains. For we are apt to forget, reading, as we tend to do, only the masterpieces of a bygone age how great a power the body of a literature possesses to impose itself: how it will not suffer itself to be read passively, but takes us and reads us; flouts our preconceptions; questions principles which we had got into the habit of taking for granted, and, in fact, splits us into two parts as we read, making us, even as we enjoy, yield our ground or stick to our guns.” (en.wikisource.org/wiki/The_Common_Reader/Notes_on_an_Elizabethan_Play)

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This is a valid observation about Elizabethan drama. But not one that really fits Dovey’s argument.

Then there’s “the state of reading consists in the complete elimination of the ego,” which appears in a private letter Woolf wrote to her friend Ethel Smyth in the early 1930s. The entire quote from the letter is:

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"Because, my dear Ethel, the state of reading consists in the complete elimination of the ego; and its the ego that erects itself like another part of the body I dont dare to name.” (Virginia Woolf, Nigel Nicolson, and Joanne Trautmann Banks, The Flight of the Mind: The Letters of Virginia Woolf, 1975, p. 319)

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Despite Dovey’s tactful condensation, this quote probably comes closest to the intention of her sentence: Woolf does indeed seem to suggest that reading requires us to let go of self-absorption. If I were going to use this for my own work, though, I’d need to go find the letter itself and read the whole thing (I might actually do that next week, but I would need to go down to William & Mary to eyeball it).

And then to wrap things up, there’s the “perpetual union.” Here’s Woolf’s original quote, from her piece “The Modern Essay”—a stinging criticism of three mediocre essayists in her own day:

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Mr. Belloc and Mr. Lucas and Mr. Squire are not fiercely attached to anything in itself. They share the contemporary dilemma–that lack of an obstinate conviction which lifts ephemeral sounds through the misty sphere of anybody’s language to the land where there is a perpetual marriage, a perpetual union. Vague as all definitions are, a good essay must have this permanent quality about it; it must draw its curtain round us but it must be a curtain that shuts us in, not out.
(www.virginiawoolfproject.com/collected-essays-by-virginia-woolf/)

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Dovey plucks out “perpetual union” and completes it with the words “with another mind.” That’s what she wants to say, but it’s certainly not what Woolf wrote.

This was a useful reminder for me: don’t use quotes cited by someone else until you go and consult the original source with your own two eyes. Too many writers cherry-pick and ignore context.

And also an opportunity for me to complicate my own generally negative take on using AI for writing: AI can be the greatest search engine ever. The AI search for those quotes covered far more books and essays and articles than the standard Internet search, and when I then asked where I could find a full copy of the book/essay/article in question, I got answers.

Thanks for sticking with me to the end of this long and somewhat tedious investigation!
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Love good literary investigations and being a huge fan of both Woolf and Claude was a interesting read. AI used right is a great tool.

The AI aspect of this is interesting. But the question that is haunting me is - how did the “quote” of Virginia Wolfe’s get past the New Yorker fact checkers in 2015 when there was no AI. Would cobbling together a “quote” from three different Wolfe sources really be acceptable even if the author showed them the source material?

This sent me thinking down a rabbit hole. As a prof of 20 years at Patrick Henry College, I have seen a lot of writing from students who do not understand the need to verify quotes. Many of my comments on writing when checking citations consist of, “please cite this as ‘original source,’ as found in (later source)…”. However, this kind of misapplied quote is becoming more common, I suspect because of AI. Related is the growing problem I have with explaining scholarly sources vs trustworthy sources. [Clarification; I teach music history and music theory.]. Program notes from a performance at Lincoln Center: tertiary source. The student needs to find the original source, primary or secondary, in which the information in those program notes was found. The students, many of them homeschooled, do not understand the need to find a source from which they could trace a chain of resources back to the original primary source or the original author who spoke to a composer in person. That problem is not new, but has been exacerbated in a time period in which the Internet provides tertiary sources easily to high school students, whose homeschooling parents do not necessarily know the difference between a trustworthy source (the program notes from Lincoln Center) and a peer-reviewed/scholarly source. A newer problem is that students who used the IEW curriculum frequently use what IEW calls the “quote opener,” for which students often cherry-pick a quote that may or may not relate to their research subject, as a catchy paper opener. Unfortunately, this means some subset of such students type into Google, “quotes about ______,” which means that I end up seeing quite a few sources cherry-picked from sources that are not their original locations, or worse yet, lifted [and sometimes misused, as in the article referenced above] from an AI search that may have involved AI-hallucinated sources or sources lifted from context, reworded, or reinterpreted at will. While I love teaching at PHC for myriad reasons, the profusion of homeschooled students there means that the papers’ use of quotes and citations (in freshman papers) are only as good as the homeschool parents’ knowledge and the specifications of the homeschool curricula. [For the record, without trying to sound obsequious, this is one of the reasons why I prefer Writing with Skill to IEW with my own children in homeschooling.]

Susan, how does it feel to be the president's enemy? See attached screenshot.

I have also found AI to be extremely useful for tracking down a quote from a primary source. I have to follow up and then verify it because otherwise it could just be complete nonsense, but it often tells me exactly where to look in ways that traditional scholarship and internet searching do not, at least not quickly. So far, one of the best uses of AI I've found. Now... if only it could do repetitive spreadsheet tasks because... come on.

I'll just add, as a word of caution- I've had friends who use AI for this exact purpose, trying to track down quotes- who have noted it is quite willing to hallucinate, even to the point of suggesting a certain book/ chapter etc as the original source- all as a mad fiction!

By far, not an AI expert. But I think it's important to distinguish between AI as a "greatly improved user interface" for certain tasks that could be done more tediously pre-AI, versus true generation of what we would think of as "creative" content (writing, music, art, etc.) So if, by AI, we mean a program that can let me write a sentence in plain English to describe what I need to have done to my spreadsheet- instead of wrestling with clumsy Excel commands for an hour- then by all means, let's have it. Improved user interface mostly isn't what we're objecting to, is it? So the tasks you describe here- a convenient, thorough search in Woolf's writings for a specific quote, with information about the original source- sounds like an enhanced online document search, with an improved user interface- not generative AI.

I've decided to start calling the basic form of AI generated language, "sterile writing." It's very clear, designed to reduce miscommunication, soulless, and the most generic form of expression available." People can reproduce it, and it drives me crazy when I see in my own language reflections of that "sterile writing."

I love Claude for this, it is great fun and really helpful. Plus, I’ve used Claude for book comps and recommendations and then gone and bought several books by new-to-me authors. AI *can* be a writer’s friend.

Yes, AI as a search engine can be a wonderful tool. Generative AI is concerning to me - that’s how we could end up with more and more of these spliced quotes through a prompt like “create a quote from ___ using any of his writings/speeches that would support the idea of ___” - a real danger of misrepresenting original quotes out of context and not reading and considering their source.

Not tedious at all — really interesting. Appreciated your enabling us to retrace your steps, and the caution about re-using quotations is warranted.

I stress a lot about kids using AI, and think it should be avoided as long as possible. Yet when I teach a gaggle of high schoolers I'm not going to be blind: only the rare stickler avoids AI, and only as a reflection of parental ranting. So I teach appropriate boundaries, and quality source-searching in this age of paywalls and data centers full of empty drama and opinion pieces is a tool that can save hours of pain.

I read a book at night with my son called "Chains". it has a quote each chapter. One was by Lord Wedderbun "Sir, we have been too long deaf. We have too long shown our forbearance an long-suffering ... Our thunders must go forth. America must be conquered.“ I looked and looked but could only find it in another book called 1776. My wife suggested using AI. I did and it pointed me to two books with parliamentary speeches. I could not find it. I tell AI it doesn't and it says, "You are right! it is not in the original, it might be that the author of 1776 has added to Wedderburn's words. Good for you on sleuthing this out. It is always best to find the original when you can. Are there any other historical inaccuracies you would like me to help you find?" It did not quite seem to understand that it was putting me on the wrong path itself. Kind of funny.

I enjoy looking up original quotes and I feel like it's much more difficult to do so now than it was 10 years ago. Perhaps, it's because the internet is so much larger now. It's easier to get tripped up in the mass of sites and writings. I really try to avoid using AI help, although some search engines make that nearly impossible!

AI is def useful for the first round of research - and then you have to verify. But I’m also finding that it can be a much quicker and better locator resources than the searches I do in EBSCO or basic Google search. Also been finding it interesting how ChatGPT will connect research questions to previous queries - it will answer not only my present query, but also reference something I asked 2 weeks ago and say, “in light of your interest in narrative in Luke, you might also find this connection helpful.” The more I use it the more connections it suggests. It’s actually often quite helpful and insightful. You might find this discussion interesting - I’m still thinking it through. Basically they talk about the ways in which AI will make many previous academic projects in the humanities obsolete but there could also be new opportunities for creative analysis. But also they discuss how some of the academic projects that AI is making obsolete are also often activities that help form our minds and analytical abilities in the first place. youtu.be/hzGB0Pn64wE?is=pAuycN7YkgRIqNNV

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