The History of the (Whole) World

my progress in writing, revising, sending to my editor, re-revising, fact-checking, galley-reading, and promoting a four-volume history of the world

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March 13th, 2010 by Susan
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I’m at the William and Mary library this afternoon, researching and writing for the middle-grade writing curriculum which will follow Writing With Ease. I’m working, simultaneously, on writing exercises based on models, and on outlining the grammatical skills middle-grade students will need to write well.

In my reading I came across this, from Colin MacCabe’s The Eloquence of the Vulgar, and thought it worth sharing.

The eighteenth century is, famously, the great century of linguistic regulation. This covered every aspect of the language from pronunciation (for the first time there is a uniform ruling class pronunciation and both manuals and coaches to instruct you how to acquire it) to literary texts (subjected for the first time to rigorous and thorough editing).

It is also the period of prescriptive grammars which try to stretch English syntax to approximate to a Latin standard held more appropriate for a language of Reason. The English authors of the preceding two centuries have become a corpus which consists largely of mistakes. The eighteenth century’s confidence that the language’s current state is far superior to its unruly past is everywhere evident; every author from Shakespeare down must have his rude and uncouth terms purged and recast his grammatical errors corrected. It is this confidence in the proper forms of language and appropriate audience for literature which allows Bentley to rewrite Milton and Tate to improve Shakespeare’s ending to King Lear….

In the last generation English teachers have made an astonishing advance in freeing themselves from the dominance of that attitude to the language which had the unspeakable arrogance to tell most pupils that they couldn’t speak their own language. Very often, however, this liberation has ben accomplished by appeals to extremely dubious linguistic and educational assumptions. The refusal of Latinate grammars as the correct model of the language has often been confused with the more dubious notion that you can teach the written language without any vocabulary with which to analyse it. The refusal to impose a form of the spoken language on pupils has been confused with the very dangerous assumption that the pupil’s spoken and written forms may be adequate for any linguistic occasion.

Most serious, however–because still very widespread–is the refusal of the use of writing exercises which depend on imitation. Such exercises still seem identified with their use in the early part of the century when the model was to be copied with absolute fidelity and the examples were all in the same register and idiom. It is, of course, ludicrous to impose on children one narrow model of the written form. However, it is equally ludicrous to assume that the pupils will automaticallly find within themselves the appropriate forms for their experience. It is only by working across a variety of written forms from the sonnet and the essay to the newspaper report or pop song that the pupil will gain the facility with language which is essential to its creative use.

The ability to move across different registers and idioms is an important skill which can only be learned by imitation whether within or without the classroom. Any teacher who looks, however, for textbooks or even research in this area will not find it.–from pages 68, 71

I’m always being asked for academic research to back up my claims that young writers shouldn’t be asked to do original writing until they’ve had the chance to imitate the forms used by other authors. As MacCabe notes, though, this isn’t an area that academic educators seem interested in exploring, so all I can do is point back a hundred or so years. The problem with pointing back to the past is that, like MacCabe, I see huge difficulties with the method as it was put to use back then: it was effective, but also inflexible, rigid, limited to a narrow range of acceptable styles and forms (exclusively British, in fact).

Haven’t solved this problem yet–which is why I’m in the library researching. Stay tuned and I’ll keep you updated on how the curriculum-construction is going.

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The medieval world runs smack into the 2012 Olympics

March 12th, 2010 by Susan
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Hey, I wrote about these guys! From CNN:

They were 51 young men who met a grisly death far from home, their heads chopped off and their bodies thrown into a mass grave.

Their resting place was unknown until last year, when workmen excavating for a road near the London 2012 Olympic sailing venue in Weymouth, England, unearthed the grave. But questions remained about who the men were, how long they had been there and why they had been decapitated.

On Friday, officials revealed that analysis of the men’s teeth shows they were Vikings, executed with sharp blows to the head around a thousand years ago. They were killed during the Dark Ages, when Vikings frequently invaded the region….

Radiocarbon dating had already placed the remains between A.D. 890 and 1030, before the Norman conquest of Anglo-Saxon England.

Scientists from the British Geological Survey then went further and analyzed the men’s teeth to find out exactly where they were from. Isotope analysis of teeth can reveal clues about a person’s drinking water, and in turn the climate they came from, said Jane Evans, an isotope geochemist at the survey.

“What we found was all of these guys came from a climate that had to be colder than Britain … probably Sweden and Norway,” Evans said by phone Friday. “One guy had such a signature of such a cold climate that he probably came from above the Arctic Circle.”

The isotopes also show the men had eaten a high-protein diet, comparable to known sites in Sweden. It means the men were probably Scandinavian Vikings who were executed by Anglo-Saxons….

Many of the executed men suffered multiple wounds, inflicted by a sharp-bladed weapon, to the skull, jaw and upper spine, all thought to relate to the process of decapitation, the Dorset County Council said.

Some men show evidence of other wounds, including a cut to the pelvis, blows to the chest and stomach, and defensive injuries to the hands, the council said.

The bones still appear cleanly sliced, indicating the men suffered a “sword-based execution,” Evans said.

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Taa-daa!

March 12th, 2010 by Susan
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After giving my faithful readers a chance to point out any blog reviews that I might have missed, I summoned my lovely assistants to help me carry out the drawing for the winner.

Ben cut apart the list of blog names,

put them in a bowl,

and shook them up.

And then Dan drew out the winner,

(drum roll….)

Hill Country Classical Academy!

Thanks to everyone who posted a review; and if you’re Hill Country Classical Academy, we’ll be in touch.

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Twitter Weekly Updates for 2010-03-07

March 7th, 2010 by Susan
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  • Watching closing ceremonies; glad that corruption and tyranny didn't permanently deprive Russia of that heartbreaking national anthem. #
  • Er. Well, closing ceremonies demonstrate that Canadians are just as good at tackiness as we Americans are. #
  • Maybe even better. #
  • Planning family day: horseback riding, cookie-eating, game-playing, room-cleaning. One of these things is not like the other. #
  • At noon today I'll be talking about public confession on WHRV's Hearsay: http://www.hearsay.org/. #
  • You can listen to Hearsay's broadcast today here: http://hearsay.org/post/Tuesday-March-2.aspx #
  • I have a fresh cold. WAAHH. #
  • Sauteeing lots and lots of garlic. Good for repelling colds (and other life-sucking dangers). #
  • Have to go in to W&M for pre-midterm student appointments (four hours worth). I will probably sneeze on them (actually, kind of karmic). #
  • Four hours of student appointments OVER. Dragging my plague-ridden self home through cold rainy streets. Need remote control, blankets, tea. #
  • DH is at College Park watching MD play Duke. I am seriously worried. This is tough for an aging man… #
  • Cell phone call from DH: THEY WON THEY'RE STORMING THE COURT GARY WILLIAMS IS AIIGGGHHHH…(end of call). #
  • Heading off the grid to write and blow my nose. #
  • Constructing a writing curriculum: no problem. Providing parents with a rubric to grade the writing: excruciatingly difficult. #
  • Ooh, I have new kitchen toys. Ravioli mold, pasta rack, potato ricer, stock pot. #
  • DH and I are collapsed tonight & watching four nights' worth of American Idol. This year's contestants are, er, idiots. #
  • Appreciating Thomas Kane's writing classification (exposition, description, persuasion, entertainment), but what kinds of writing don't fit? #
  • Spring colds should have their own disease name. Like "Rhinovirus Horrendous Eternalis." Or "Coronavirus Hacknspittius Despairius." #
  • Have totally lost voice & am forced to communicate w/children w/facial expressions & frantic hand gestures. Guess how THAT'S working for me. #
  • My mother just brought me a referee's whistle. Best get-well present EVER. #

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Blog reviews: here they are!

March 7th, 2010 by Susan
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Thanks to all of you who responded to my blog review offer!

Here’s a list of the blog reviews that we know of. Enjoy reading, if you feel so inclined. And if you reviewed the book and DON’T see your blog here, post a comment for me.

What Came Down Today

Mom Loves Books

Civil Thoughts

Wakefield Academy

Howling Frog Books

Nicole, Worcester

It’s All in a Day…

Notes from the North

Our Curious Home

Canadian Ladybug Reviews

Associated Content

Hill Country Classical Academy

Our Homeschool Adventure

Homeschooling Hearts & Minds

Seeking His Mind

Created for Good Works

Tellin’ It

Homeschooling With Love

Home School Book Review

The Golden Road to Samarqand

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The last couple of (scattered) weeks

March 3rd, 2010 by Susan
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For the last couple of weeks I’ve been turning in circles, which is why I haven’t done a long post. It hasn’t been an ineffective sort of circling–I feel more like I’m cooking and I have four or five hot pans in front of me, and a couple more on burners behind me, and I have to keep turning around from one pan to the next, and the next, and the next, so that nothing scorches. (But they all have something good in them.)

So here’s what I’m doing.

1. I’m working on the outline of a course for The Teaching Company. They recruited me to teach for them right before Christmas and I’m thrilled. Can’t post details yet because the course is still in development but I’ll keep you informed.

2. I’ve been keeping track of reactions to the History of the Medieval World, which has only been out for a week and is still in the “review window” for most papers, magazines, and journals. (The window gets ever narrower.)

This is a kind review from The Providence Journal:

Bauer treats her period (from the early fourth century to the late 11th century) with a fine-tooth comb, and as the chapters march across the globe and the battles and treaties, the droughts and famines accrue, there is the distinct danger that readers will be swept away in a sea of names and dates. After all, even 640 pages seem a bit skimpy up against 700 years of world history.
Curiously — and much to Bauer’s credit– the reader who stays the course starts to see the globe differently, at first as the arena for myriad independent clashes, and then, slowly but surely, as a unified whole where no nation is an island.

and a fun one from a blog I read occasionally (and would read more often if they’d ditch the horrible white-on-black type); it is, as you’ll see, co-written by four MEN.

Let me, first, say a word about the genre of a world history book/series. For a historian, this undertaking is their Super Bowl, the World Series, and March Madness all rolled into one. Imagine for one moment what it means to try and write a history of the entire world – including all sections of the globe, covering all time for as long as written history (and a little before) has existed!

3. I’m working on the History of the Renaissance World. Those of you who follow me on Twitter will be happy to know that I’m finally out of India.

4. The spring speaking schedule has begun. Reflections on my first trip of the year are here.

5. I’m finishing up a scope and sequence for the middle-grade writing series; don’t email to ask us when the books will be published (I’ll let you KNOW, I promise) but I’m making progress. Have been reading Aristotle and Cicero and contemplating how to use topics exercises with sixth-graders.

6. I’ve mucked out stalls. A LOT. It keep raining and snowing and the horses hunker down in there and…make a mess.

7. I’m reading student papers: my creative writing students had ten thousand words due by this week.

8. I’ve been filling out college financial aid forms for Son #1. AGGHH. And imagine: I get to do this every spring for the next FOURTEEN YEARS. Hurrah.

9. I’m editing a new series for Peace Hill Press.

All good things. But disorienting to do so many at once. And I feel like I’m leaving something out…

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Twitter Weekly Updates for 2010-02-28

February 28th, 2010 by Susan
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  • Fresh pasta experiment: sage tortellini with ricotta & mozzarella filling, served with browned butter. DS13 SNARFED them, vacuum-like. #
  • Release date for The History of the Medieval World! (Book's been shipping for weeks, but today's the OFFICIAL pub day=good excuse to party.) #
  • "When in trouble or in doubt/Run in circles, scream and shout." Turns into my motto every time I start getting stuff together for taxes. #
  • Tomorrow, leaving for Atlanta with DH for two nights. Today, making up schedules for kids to follow EVERY MINUTE of EVERY HOUR we're gone. #
  • Planning out interlocking kid schedules for next three days is more complicated than organizing major land war with multiple fronts. #
  • Scrolling message on gas station pump tonight: "How was your day? We hope it gets better soon!" Sounds like answer has been predetermined. #
  • Husband is currently getting the heck screened out of him at Richmond International. #
  • Just arrived in Atlanta. Plane bounced so hard that flight attendant thanked us for dropping in. #
  • At Hyatt in downtown Atlanta. VERY SCARY elevators. Also enormous hanging lobby sculpture like spider descending onto our heads.. #
  • Getting ready to talk about "Learning for a Lifetime in the Classical Tradition" at Heritage Prep School's "Lectures in the City" (Atlanta). #
  • Planning on the Botanical Gardens in Atlanta this morning. Any recommendations for a fabulous lunch place nearby? #
  • So far have not eaten a single meal in Atlanta that arrived in a timely manner. Every restaurant: long wait, server not making eye contact. #
  • Heading to the Atlanta aquarium this morning. #
  • Sitting in the Delta lounge, waiting to catch flight home. Loved Atlanta, don't want to live there. #
  • The History of the Medieval World featured at the Page 99 Test: http://tinyurl.com/ylzf3h2. #
  • College aid forms: Just submitted financial info to feds via FAFSA. Fail to see why I should submit it again to for-profit College Board. #
  • There is a special place in hell for the bureaucrats who designed college aid forms. And for the techies who designed their web interfaces. #

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Publication day!

February 22nd, 2010 by Susan
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Today’s the formal release date for The History of the Medieval World.

It’s actually been shipping for weeks; “publication day” is a myth, as I’ve noted before. But as of today it’s officially shipping. Also, over the next couple of weeks the book should get decent positioning closer to the front of bricks-and-mortar stores, before returning to the “History” shelves to hang out with its own kind for the rest of its life.

Contrary to what you might think from reading about the glamorous lives of authors, publisher-sponsored publication parties are few and far between. You probably get one if you 1) live in Manhattan and/or 2) hit the New York Times bestseller list on a regular basis, and/or 3) work in publishing, thus rendering it embarrassing for your colleagues not to throw a party.

The rest of us get to throw parties for ourselves.

So we’ve having dinner with friends, and I’m baking. I’ve just finished making a white velvet cake with a chocolate ganache frosting for us to party with here, and I’m getting ready to make a German chocolate cake with coconut and pecan filling to take to dinner tonight.

In this house, celebration equals carbohydrates. So grab a cookie or a handful of chocolate chips and join me in a virtual publication party. (And hey, if you happen to see the book stacked on a front table at a nearby store, snap a picture with your cell phone and send it to the webmaster at welltrainedmind.com.)

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Twitter Weekly Updates for 2010-02-21

February 21st, 2010 by Susan
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  • A werewolf would have eviscerated loud paper-crumpling whispering couple next to us, thus improving movie tremendously. #
  • Watching Olympic snowboarding. I know this is supposed to be a real sport. It doesn't LOOK like a real sport [age showing]. #
  • Tuesdays are my Mondays. #
  • Working on tonight's lecture, editing a manuscript for Peace Hill Press, hoping to get back to Renaissance Europe before 3 PM… #
  • One out of three isn't too bad… #
  • DS16 has brand-new learner's permit! Hurrah, hurrah! #
  • Some cosmic intelligence-sucking force must compel NBC interviewers to ask, "How does it FEEL to triumph/epically fail at the Olympics"? #
  • I think Tiger Woods read my book. #
  • Getting ready to comment on Tiger Woods apology for Channel 13. #
  • WVEC in Hampton, 5:30 news–if you're local, tune in to catch me comment on Tiger! (Unless, of course, it gets cut. Always a possibility.) #
  • William & Mary asked me to comment on Tiger Woods via the W&M YouTube channel: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blhH39g2xtc #
  • Yesterday was busy. Can't…get…moving…today… #
  • Not sure making cherry streusel coffeecake is really the most theologically sound way to kick off the first Sunday in Lent. #
  • Nearly sixty degrees and sunny. Going riding this afternoon, for the first time in weeks. #

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Quick photo update on the gap year trip…

February 17th, 2010 by Susan
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My oldest son is currently on his gap year trip, which began with a volunteer stint at a wildlife rehabilitation center in South Africa. He just sent a few photos…

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